9- The difference is remarkable. What was delicious is now sumptuously amazing. John’s aware of the soft moan rising up out of him, but it’s irrelevant. Sherlock’s deeper moan joins along and he frees John’s mouth to delicately lick his upper lip before saying, “Oh, John, this is even BETTER.” Again ‘saying’ should be ‘purring’ or some adjective that means ‘tone that sidles up to the libido and gives it a very friendly fondle’. “No complaints here,” John says a little breathily. (tbc)